- Aesthetics - Lv3
- Creativity - Lv3
- Technology - Lv4
- Understanding - Lv4
- Production Values - Lv4
Overall: High Level 3, Low Level 4
WWW: Very detailed information, funny and creative,
EBI: Longer time to read the text, less writing, could have considered using a voiceover
Mr Bush's feedback:
- Aesthetics - Lv4
- Creativity - Lv4
- Technology - Lv3
- Understanding - Lv4
- Production Values - Lv3
WWW: very humorous, well paced, original research
EBI: include more videos of your own
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